Hater - David Moody.
Didn't really make it past the first page...
Simmons, regional manager for a chain of high street discount stores, slipped his change into his pocket then neatly folded his newspaper in half and tucked it under his arm. He quickly glanced at his watch before leaving the shop and rejoining the faceless mass of shoppers and office workers crowding the city centre pavements outside.
The perils of the self-published? I looked up on goodreads, and people do like this book. It, hell, isn't even just one book but the first of at least three in a series. But I want to be able to tell good writing from bad. I don't know what the standards really are, but I've decided that excising pointless adverbs must be one. SO WHY DOES THE MAN QUICKLY GLANCE AT HIS WATCH? IS AN ORDINARY GLANCE NOT QUICK ENOUGH FOR THE INFECTED?!